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Back and we mean it.

Journal Entry: Thu Oct 13, 2005, 8:21 PM
Yes, we're finally cutting the bullshit. We are back and this ship is not going down.

On that note, we have some starting requests from the past months for critiques, now all we need is more critics. Old critics of OWAT still interested in critiquing, please note the account. We need you, and we need new people as well if we can get them.

Please follow the instructions below to apply for a position if you are interested. Please, please, dear God only apply if you're willing to put in the time and effort.

How to apply:
Please note your applications to us.

In an application for staff commenter, we are looking for the following:

:bulletred: How much experience you have with writing.
:bulletred: How much experience you have with critiquing.
:bulletred: How much time you can devote.
:bulletred: Why you would like to be part of our commenting staff.

As a commenter, all you are required to do is make 3 critiques a week. Please specify in the subject of your note which position you are applying for. If you don't follow these rules, your application will be discarded.

Thanks always,
:lightbulb:
la petite ampoule

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=Squarix:iconSquarix: Dec 6, 2007, 7:59:44 PM
come back! :omgf:

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~BlessidMerc:iconBlessidMerc: Sep 27, 2007, 8:46:59 AM
I have a few "teleplays" for animated program concepts I'd like critiqued. Do you do those?

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~DryBonesReborn:iconDryBonesReborn: Feb 20, 2007, 6:03:26 PM
Thanks!

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=braakdown:iconbraakdown: Feb 20, 2007, 5:51:15 PM
I don't know if you found this yet, but here's the infamous Grammar Nazi.

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~orrville:iconorrville: Feb 16, 2007, 9:14:05 PM
i can't let go.

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~DryBonesReborn:iconDryBonesReborn: Jan 3, 2007, 7:45:38 PM
Do you guys know where I could find that 'Grammer Nazi' deviation? I thought your group had it. It was funny. Thanks for helping me on this site!

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~perseus-stoned:iconperseus-stoned: Oct 21, 2006, 10:37:21 AM
I just wanted to thank you guys for all the hard-work and effort you put into furthering art. I ran into a comment on someone's site awhile ago, left by someone in this group, and thought its great there are people out there helping to improve others. Thanks.
~psychodrive:iconpsychodrive: Sep 9, 2006, 9:22:12 PM
:poke:

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~onewordatatime:icononewordatatime: Jun 26, 2006, 11:49:59 AM
We are a bit back logged with requests and lives, but we are still around. :)

:coffeecup:

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=Drunken-Splice:iconDrunken-Splice: Jun 12, 2006, 4:44:34 AM
still alive here? I sent you a note a while ago and normally I don't check up on this and all but it looks like the last time you were in was sometime round May 30th. Just wondering if this is still up and running.

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*Elune-555:iconElune-555: May 30, 2006, 7:30:30 PM
Yes I realized about the gallery. It's good to know they are still active. It may be a good idea to post something more recent for others, like me, who are looking at the dates and wondering. ;)

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*jahg:iconjahg: May 30, 2006, 6:46:30 PM
Yes, it is. The gallery isn't the focus for this group, the giving of helpful critique takes its place.

The Journal is still relevant too, as they recently advertised in the Poetry and Prose Forum for exactly the same thing. :nod:

Regards,

James
*Elune-555:iconElune-555: May 30, 2006, 1:07:47 PM
Is this group still active? The journal was written in 2005 and the gallery hasn't been updated since 2004...just wondering.

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~DryBonesReborn:iconDryBonesReborn: May 19, 2006, 2:04:47 PM
Thank you! :)

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~onewordatatime:icononewordatatime: May 19, 2006, 9:08:33 AM
<checks> It's on the pending list, we'll get around to it as soon as we can. :)

:sun:

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~DryBonesReborn:iconDryBonesReborn: May 18, 2006, 1:28:16 PM
um.. I SENT it a while ago through the note system. :(

It's a work in progress...um.. needs edited. I have been getting some help, but.. something is off. Thanks

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~onewordatatime:icononewordatatime: May 18, 2006, 9:11:03 AM
Please send us a note with a link to your piece and we'll get around to it. :)

:sun:

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~DryBonesReborn:iconDryBonesReborn: May 13, 2006, 6:00:00 PM
I sent you mine.. months ago :(. I hope everything is going better and stuff.

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~onewordatatime:icononewordatatime: May 6, 2006, 12:58:13 PM
Please send us a note with the link to your piece if you want it critiqued.

Secondly, please follow the guidelines in our journal if you'd like to apply for staff. We need poetry critics in particular, actually, so please spread the word. Thank you,

:lightbulb: la petite ampoule

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~Sparton117:iconSparton117: May 2, 2006, 11:39:24 AM
i do poetry i could help...
here is a piece of my art for you to view about my style of poetry.
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send me a note if you need another poetry critiquer.

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~onewordatatime:icononewordatatime: Apr 9, 2006, 3:07:50 PM
We're down.

We could use some more poetry critiquers, though. :hmm: Send out that word, too, while you're at it.

:lightbulb: la petite ampoule

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~onewordatatime:icononewordatatime: Apr 9, 2006, 3:06:57 PM
Send us a note with the link and it'll be added to our list. :)

:lightbulb: la petite ampoule

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`Bringa:iconBringa: Mar 29, 2006, 11:11:25 AM
So are you guys still critiquing poetry? I'm being asked to critique poetry and I want to just tell people to come to YOU instead ;) Is that cool?

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